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Go Ahead (Free verse) by misused
Go Ahead mom take another drink dont worry i can take another hit Another slap but can you face the fact im not a little girl anymore i will hit back

Up the ladder: Sins of a Father

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.75
Weighted score: 5.2086053
Overall Rank: 4518
Posted: April 3, 2008 8:01 PM PDT; Last modified: April 3, 2008 8:01 PM PDT
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[8] daggatolar @ 41.219.236.75 | 22-Apr-08/9:01 AM | Reply
Mom please don't heed this poem
don,t go ahead anymore.
[n/a] misused @ 206.77.0.155 > daggatolar | 9-May-08/7:50 AM | Reply
but she will its life you just lean to except it
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