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Lost (not a poem) (Free verse) by Caducus
Sometimes lost souls are too dark inside to be found. Sometimes dreams stop the moment you live it and when it leaves you all you want to do is sleep and forsake all reality without it. Some people are hated by other people who envy you because they desire what you have and some people try to destroy true love for they cannot have it. Love is not a food chain but thousands of links gradually built to form an everlasting bond that is unbreakable. Sometimes things happen and then they stop happening for reasons known only to God. Once a heart breaks mortals become ghosts. They walk in limbo haunting themselves from the memories shared with their true love. When you fall in love everything looks beautiful,the sky overhead is bluer than normal, the smell of bonfires evoke peaceful reminiscence of childhood and everyone else becomes a blur, a shadow, all but the one you love. If this is taken away then all the beauty of the world becomes nothing - picture nothing, picture what you live for, what you hope for and only then if you feel overwhelmed by nothing then you are lost. I am all but nothing born from everything I dreamed until her loves awakening.

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.75
Weighted score: 5.089402
Overall Rank: 6342
Posted: October 3, 2005 1:30 AM PDT; Last modified: October 3, 2005 1:30 AM PDT
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[7] wilco @ 66.61.101.130 | 3-Oct-05/1:35 PM | Reply
This just doesn't have the...i don't know...vagueness I've come to expect from you. It didn't make me think. There's some good lines here but I think it could benefit from you MAKING it a poem.
[8] daggatolar @ 195.166.242.114 | 5-Oct-05/1:19 PM | Reply
true to the heart can love so out this world be worthy of a world eating up hearts before you can even earn a meal to live to see tomorrow?
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