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Lost (not a poem) (Free verse) by Caducus
Sometimes lost souls are too dark inside to be found. Sometimes dreams
stop the moment you live it and when it leaves you all you want to do is
sleep and forsake all reality without it. Some people are hated by other
people who envy you because they desire what you have and some people
try to destroy true love for they cannot have it. Love is not a food
chain but thousands of links gradually built to form an everlasting bond
that is unbreakable.
Sometimes things happen and then they stop happening for reasons known
only to God.
Once a heart breaks mortals become ghosts. They walk in limbo haunting
themselves from the memories shared with their true love. When you fall
in love everything looks beautiful,the sky overhead is bluer than normal,
the smell of bonfires evoke peaceful reminiscence of childhood and
everyone else becomes a blur, a shadow, all but the one you love. If
this is taken away then all the beauty of the world becomes nothing -
picture nothing, picture what you live for, what you hope for and only
then if you feel overwhelmed by nothing then you are lost.
I am all but nothing born from everything I dreamed until her loves
awakening.
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Posted: October 3, 2005 1:30 AM PDT; Last modified: October 3, 2005 1:30 AM PDT
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