Re: Green by berdabear	24-Sep-04/5:30 AM
any "green" ripe a pluck,like the above consumated in flesh is worth the "ticklishing" in the mouth.
Re: Screws by helenwales	24-Sep-04/5:24 AM
if nuts gets opened, the screw-driving is well done. only that, after the "dance" .... whose's flesh wears the "plasters" and who pays the bill for the pains.
Re: Cleansing Sudan by Mr Pig	24-Sep-04/3:20 AM
black Africa remains the darkest of heart, no thanks to the joint conspiracy of hard shoe leather of "whiteness" imperialism and the black mongols devouring and sending the youngs to live no other lives than the gun
Re: Little Dreamer by TLRufener	21-Sep-04/5:44 AM
fly baby fly the only way to keep alive is to keep dreaming. like the kiddish simpilicty.
Re: The Bleeding Rose by BleedingRose	21-Sep-04/5:25 AM
The temptation is you or the poem, i a have feeling of happening\s or is it the title that brings the read to such a high.... life is one hell of a bleeding unend, not when for a woman , this is the very sacrifice life demands of her, painful if then love a smokescreen to cool the nerve or fool her away the truth of life is denied and turns a party in the very game of adding to the pains of humanhood, rose never cease the bleed keep the fire for nothing, for poetry to continue the circle of birth to life.
Re: Solitude by Dovina	15-Sep-04/1:05 PM
"right" about the "recluse", for how can this poem, any poem be birth
Re: save by calliope	13-Sep-04/11:09 AM
Unfortunately, the "uncooked" beef is in wait for the fire. The butcher deed is done already.... if only our love can become love beyond the self then maybe freedom can grow to mean something in us for others. Good poem can only fit in a world transformed free from strive and competition
Re: Born Of Hope by longships	13-Sep-04/11:01 AM
Much like my dark black country, Nigeria, except that unlike you, I do not see the "children born of hope" here, we are all a long way from "A new beginning"
Re: The Time is my enemy by Prince of Void	26-Aug-04/8:46 AM
Time is not our curse, nature transcient cannot be placed @ THE FEET OF TIME , to choose to make an enemy of time is not to understand that without time even our our existence becomes a nullity, a void we cannot reckon with. In life unend we have in a way subvert the conspiracy of time, even when you mean to say death, this is why "in the ending" a "beginning" can and would be.
Re: The Time is my enemy by Prince of Void	26-Aug-04/8:44 AM
Time is not our curse, nature transcient cannot be placed @ THE FEET OF TIME , to choose to make an enemy of time is not to understand that without time even our our existence becomes a nullity, a void we cannot reckon with. In life unend we have in a way subvert the conspiracy of time, even when you mean to say death.
Re: Symphony of Despairs by Prince of Void	22-Aug-04/12:26 PM
Enriched by too many big words, demanding more than a second reading to mean our world so full of despairs of
Re: Seven by toker071	28-Feb-04/7:10 PM
In the wildest of imagination, a queen would not stoop down to the "sand" to play with a dreamer and that is the very fun denid us for no longer being seven. To call this very fun hell, is to lampoon the heaven e no longer can have with the "sand", simply becos we are grown ups How I would want to be seven again and dream a queen who would take the sand for heaven.