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Seven (Free verse) by toker071 For one shining moment I was a king,
the world was mine and she was my queen.
My kingdom then crumbled,
my queen moved away.
I was so sad, I wish she could.ve stayed.
We played in the sand,
I thought it was heaven.
But she's gone now.
It's hell bein seven.
Up the ladder:
Pills
Down the ladder:
A Christmas Thought
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Posted: February 27, 2004 10:39 PM PST; Last modified: February 27, 2004 10:39 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.0596013 Overall Rank: 6698 Comments:
In the wildest of imagination, a queen would not stoop down to the "sand" to play with a dreamer and that is the very fun denid us for no longer being seven.
To call this very fun hell, is to lampoon the heaven e no longer can have with the "sand", simply becos we are grown ups How I would want to be seven again and dream a queen who would take the sand for heaven. 148 view(s)
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Tonka trucks, pigtails
you can use my favorite one -
castles in the sand