poemranker ::Like A Rainbow by jasondingus

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Like A Rainbow

Member since 2003 · Posted 28 Dec 2003 · 2 comments

Just the like the rainbow, we can be, for all eternity, You the blue, I the green, I think Im in a dream, The sun is out, the rain is gone, Across the sky, the rainbow is shown, You the blue, I the green, Our love is forever seen, For a short time it will there be, Across the sky, for everyone to see, Soon it will fade, and drift away, But there is always the promise, It will be back one day, You the blue, I the green, Our love is an incredible thing, Like vibrant colors, and a pot of gold, You're the one, I want to forever hold!!!

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[10] singinkygal 9-Jan-04/7:20 PM Reply
I love it when a man can be this poetic. Pour your heart out baby!!! 10
[7] sliver 5-Sep-04/4:50 PM Reply
Why can't she be the yellow and you the blue, or maybe purple?