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I must (Free verse) by phbiscuit
There's a meal Growing cold on my table. Roast beef and potatoes. I'm out here in the mist Drawing a line in the dirt From where I sit To that table Feeling the soil Clump together, The grass growing stiff. I know you are worrying. The clock on the mantle Does not lie. There are only so many hours in a night. I have found them all In the forest. I misstepped, But I still know the way. I will lay down, Close my eyes, Then I will be there. A lucky man, Feeling nothing, Only seeing That I have chopped enough wood For the fire to keep burning. Then, I will go. I must go.

Down the ladder: Oasis

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.0596013
Overall Rank: 6778
Posted: February 7, 2004 6:54 PM PST; Last modified: February 7, 2004 6:54 PM PST
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[n/a] deleted user @ 24.222.81.233 | 9-Feb-04/1:18 PM | Reply
Disarming.
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