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STAN (Other) by poetry_rancour
Who is this "Stan" who sowed his seed Across the Middle East? AfganiSTAN, UzbekiSTAN And PakiSTAN, not the least Lets not forget TurkmeniSTAN Hard by yer Caspian Sea. It's capital: Unpronounceable! But "Stan" was there it seems Old "Stan" the man did leave his mark From Bishkek to Tashkent And we can't say how long it took But we know just where he went Where is this little gadabout Who travelled far and wide Perhaps he seeks his brother Way down the river Clyde RGL

Up the ladder: garden spite
Down the ladder: Beneath The Undertow

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.0596013
Overall Rank: 6750
Posted: March 13, 2007 9:31 AM PDT; Last modified: March 13, 2007 9:31 AM PDT
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[8] Bethy @ 165.154.46.93 | 13-Mar-07/10:04 AM | Reply
talent...fun to read...:) Bethy
[6] richa @ 81.179.219.225 | 13-Mar-07/12:09 PM | Reply
I don't get the ending. Looks kind of forced.
[n/a] poetry_rancour @ 142.205.240.27 > richa | 13-Mar-07/12:40 PM | Reply
Perhaps I ran out of time and wit!
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