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Green (Other) by berdabear Green
Pools of desire
Luscious whisps of black tickling flesh
framing rivers of emotion
a gateway to your soul
Multidimensions of color flow endlessly
Lost in green
drowning
falling
flying
cradled in spinning
green.
Up the ladder:
Innocence
Down the ladder:
He
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Posted: September 23, 2004 8:56 AM PDT; Last modified: September 23, 2004 8:56 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.4994626 Overall Rank: 2741 Comments:
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daggatolar @ 212.199.251.77
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24-Sep-04/5:30 AM
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any "green" ripe a pluck,like the above consumated in flesh is worth the "ticklishing" in the mouth.
Tag! Desired effect. Its like looking in the eyes of someone you love so much it aches inside. And you feel like drowning in it. Like your dizzy with desire.
Green eyes, envious hearts.
Its going pretty good sorta. As good as it can for me. 211 view(s)
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