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Green (Other) by berdabear

Green Pools of desire Luscious whisps of black tickling flesh framing rivers of emotion a gateway to your soul Multidimensions of color flow endlessly Lost in green drowning falling flying cradled in spinning green.

berdabear 27-Sep-04/2:52 PM
Tag! Desired effect. Its like looking in the eyes of someone you love so much it aches inside. And you feel like drowning in it. Like your dizzy with desire.




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