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Innocence (Free verse) by QuirkyWonder Shooting stars so gently
Break up the monotony of the sky
To the silver white moon
Hanging by a thread
Of dreams that is
Littered across the sky
Each sparkle of a star
Witing to be wished upon
By little kids with big dreams
Anxious to conquer the world
Up the ladder:
He
Down the ladder:
Totem Pole
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Posted: August 2, 2004 7:47 PM PDT; Last modified: August 2, 2004 7:47 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.4994626 Overall Rank: 2757 Comments:
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eyrbare @ 64.33.190.48
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2-Aug-04/8:56 PM
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Lovely! Great visual poem! Way to paint a picture with words! =-)
great poem, i like this more than ur others, seems to be of a better mood, -9-
you know how to play with your words here...
"waiting to be wished upon."
Cute.
lovely
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