Innocence

Member since 2004 · Posted 2 Aug 2004 · 5 comments

Shooting stars so gently Break up the monotony of the sky To the silver white moon Hanging by a thread Of dreams that is Littered across the sky Each sparkle of a star Witing to be wished upon By little kids with big dreams Anxious to conquer the world

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5 comments

[8] eyrbare 2-Aug-04/8:56 PM Reply

Lovely! Great visual poem! Way to paint a picture with words! =-)

[9] electroman1979 2-Aug-04/9:25 PM Reply

great poem, i like this more than ur others, seems to be of a better mood, -9-

[9] arduinn 3-Aug-04/3:50 AM Reply

you know how to play with your words here...

[7] Dovina 3-Aug-04/10:28 AM Reply

"waiting to be wished upon."
Cute.

[9] frdup717 3-Aug-04/12:14 PM Reply

lovely
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