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Innocence (Free verse) by QuirkyWonder

Shooting stars so gently Break up the monotony of the sky To the silver white moon Hanging by a thread Of dreams that is Littered across the sky Each sparkle of a star Witing to be wished upon By little kids with big dreams Anxious to conquer the world

electroman1979 2-Aug-04/9:25 PM
great poem, i like this more than ur others, seems to be of a better mood, -9-




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