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Innocence (Free verse) by QuirkyWonder

Shooting stars so gently Break up the monotony of the sky To the silver white moon Hanging by a thread Of dreams that is Littered across the sky Each sparkle of a star Witing to be wished upon By little kids with big dreams Anxious to conquer the world

eyrbare 2-Aug-04/8:56 PM
Lovely! Great visual poem! Way to paint a picture with words! =-)




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