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Symphony of Despairs (Other) by Prince of Void
See despairs and realize my oppressed life Within continuous images of desperation After the desires brunt my divine vision A failure’s growing in all time of a lost expectation The demoralization of destiny has risen Facing wars in reflections of a hollow ambition Crossing ashes of worlds in the enduring illusion Of moldering bodies to the land of Misapprehension All men are passionate in this new brave misconception Toward disheartening inspirations of a dark impression Listening to the symphony of despairs dying down Crooning within the melody of depression Shedding tears upon ocean of disillusion Here rising and falling in the ruination of creation Restless in stillness of doubts darkening horizon Drowning slowly among waves of frustration Fading in all false concepts of imagination The whole's ending inside only fears and abomination

Up the ladder: Lament
Down the ladder: My testament to free speech

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.8
Weighted score: 5.095362
Overall Rank: 6127
Posted: August 21, 2004 5:45 PM PDT; Last modified: August 21, 2004 5:45 PM PDT
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[6] daggatolar @ 212.247.106.51 | 22-Aug-04/12:26 PM | Reply
Enriched by too many big words, demanding more than a second reading to mean our world so full of despairs of
[n/a] Prince of Void @ 217.218.131.137 > daggatolar | 22-Aug-04/1:24 PM | Reply
yeah right...but imagine a man is lost in his words ..he doest know what are really happenig ..destiny made him to hate and fear about the world ..about his own existence in this creation can be useless when he need something to know somebody to understand then he find his own peace of mind ...maybe he is doomed so he could despair for things has made such oppressed life ......everything is temporary ..soon or latter ,time will destory everything
[n/a] Prince of Void @ 217.218.131.137 > daggatolar | 22-Aug-04/1:37 PM | Reply
YEAH RIGHT BUT IMAGIN A MAN WHO IS LOST IN HIS WORDS
he does'nt know what is really happening now
...destiny made him hate and fear about the world about his own existence


everything is temporay ..soon or latter
time will destory everything
[n/a] zodiac @ 217.23.37.85 > Prince of Void | 26-Aug-04/1:45 AM | Reply
For the last twenty four hours, I've been suffering from a bad bout of superdysentery and the aftermath of a local diet composed almost entirely of various starches wrapped around, or stuffed into, other starches. However, I'm pleased to report I still had enough gruelly unction left in me to, upon reading your comment and its preceding, presumably unedited, version, promptly evacuate it into the seat of my Thursday dishdash. Thank you, thank you so much for being you!
[7] Dovina @ 24.52.157.176 | 22-Aug-04/3:01 PM | Reply
Yes, such despair, deprivation, disilusionment and misconception. All is void of hope and any glimmer of happiness. Hey, might as well eat, drink and be merry.
[6] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.130.62.63 | 22-Aug-04/3:18 PM | Reply
I see the dictionary was opened to D for dung-or-eeeeees.
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