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The Time is my enemy

Member since 2002 · Posted 26 Aug 2004 · Edited 26 Aug 2004 · 4 comments

Time is my enemy Within the haunting melody And everything is temporary From dreams to the eternity By crossing memories Staring at the moment Of destroying And being destroyed,Gone by every second In the stillness of ruination Dying down In the ending which is my beginning

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[n/a] daggatolar 26-Aug-04/8:44 AM Reply
Time is not our curse, nature transcient cannot be placed @ THE FEET OF TIME , to choose to make an enemy of time is not to understand that without time even our our existence becomes a nullity, a void we cannot reckon with.

In life unend we have in a way subvert the conspiracy of time, even when you mean to say death.
[n/a] Prince of Void › daggatolar 27-Aug-04/12:52 PM Reply
Time has been placed in the place of Horror
when consequences are against your circumstances
and choices are lost in attempts of dooms
[n/a] daggatolar 26-Aug-04/8:46 AM Reply
Time is not our curse, nature transcient cannot be placed @ THE FEET OF TIME , to choose to make an enemy of time is not to understand that without time even our our existence becomes a nullity, a void we cannot reckon with.

In life unend we have in a way subvert the conspiracy of time, even when you mean to say death, this is why "in the ending" a "beginning" can and would be.
[7] Dovina 26-Aug-04/11:54 AM Reply
You seem walking in circles within a supposed enemy which is simply the way of things.