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Symphony of Despairs (Other) by Prince of Void

See despairs and realize my oppressed life Within continuous images of desperation After the desires brunt my divine vision A failure’s growing in all time of a lost expectation The demoralization of destiny has risen Facing wars in reflections of a hollow ambition Crossing ashes of worlds in the enduring illusion Of moldering bodies to the land of Misapprehension All men are passionate in this new brave misconception Toward disheartening inspirations of a dark impression Listening to the symphony of despairs dying down Crooning within the melody of depression Shedding tears upon ocean of disillusion Here rising and falling in the ruination of creation Restless in stillness of doubts darkening horizon Drowning slowly among waves of frustration Fading in all false concepts of imagination The whole's ending inside only fears and abomination

zodiac 26-Aug-04/1:45 AM
For the last twenty four hours, I've been suffering from a bad bout of superdysentery and the aftermath of a local diet composed almost entirely of various starches wrapped around, or stuffed into, other starches. However, I'm pleased to report I still had enough gruelly unction left in me to, upon reading your comment and its preceding, presumably unedited, version, promptly evacuate it into the seat of my Thursday dishdash. Thank you, thank you so much for being you!




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