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The Fear of Being and will not be forever (Other) by Prince of Void
I was in the pursuit of happiness But I found nothing yet in this seeming eternity As day decays times show the changes of every chapters of my own doom Am I still in my false vision? Another day rises under moldering skin of my desires it makes me feel the body of emptiness grows Inside me and my illusion If they call it despairs from my furry to this creation let me call it a thing I am becoming it gradually The despairs of recreating myself The Sorrow of rebuilding a new world The tears of a mystic lost in his doubts The fears of being and will not be forever The loneliness of all my suffering in my last solitude It’s all in my ultimate nothingness

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.3333333
Weighted score: 4.8013287
Overall Rank: 11127
Posted: January 6, 2005 2:03 PM PST; Last modified: January 6, 2005 2:03 PM PST
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[6] daggatolar @ 80.179.102.34 | 7-Jan-05/6:29 AM | Reply
we are eternally condemned by itself to nothingness, and for this we need not hold our selves in pain and agony over this since before death we all are helpless, but least that death is incapable of taking away from us is LIFE,lets live it in full and in meaning to make the world a better place , indeed to "REBUILDING A NEW WORLD"for the whole of humanity , this for me is my poem....
[4] cuddlytiger17 @ 209.105.136.92 | 8-Jan-05/3:11 PM | Reply
Some of these lines don't make sense at all...might want to edit some of your grammar and "fury" is with one "r"...
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