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Love has been awoke. (edited, needs new title) (Free verse) by TheVoiceless
Away at college,
My love. To whom I never confessed,
To far gone to hold within these loving arms.
Caress her day by day.
Years we âdatedâ,
Hell we even mated.
But I⦠I couldnât say a thing.
Does that mean it was a sexual thing?
Cause hardly ever did we express,
A pen and paper always around was stress.
Feeling all alone,
Sitting in wait by the phone.
I may be mute but not deaf!
Will you never call, that being questioned?
Heartbreak is setting in, feeling its pain.
The slow trickle of organs overheating,
Insides like a snow cone melting in summerâs day.
You reached and touched with a frosting freeze,
Making again solid my heart and chest with ridged silk.
Today was the day the phone finally rang.
To ear I held it, listening to you breath.
Then finally after silences wait, you spoke.
This letting known youâre still in reach.
Fears now dormant in hibernation.
Love has been awoken, but not spoken.
What a great thing a voice could be.
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.3333333
Weighted score: 4.8013287
Overall Rank: 11098
Posted: September 13, 2003 2:25 AM PDT; Last modified: September 15, 2003 2:44 AM PDT
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i have seen of you
try harder.