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A Pill (Free verse) by D. $ Fontera
I took a pill which holds a lie I took a pill which makes me cry The more I take The more I'll die I took a pill which holds a lie
Up the ladder: I'm Blushing 4 You
Down the ladder: Broken
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.3333333
Weighted score: 4.8013287
Overall Rank: 11134
Posted: August 28, 2005 11:59 AM PDT; Last modified: August 28, 2005 11:59 AM PDT
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