True Love

Member since 2007 · Posted 14 Jun 2011 · 2 comments

The alluring charm of true love Reflects the purity of an appealing dove Gushing like a scintillating sonnet of the heart Instigating every soul for a brand new start True love is like a meandering stream Placidly flowing fortifying our lovely dreams True love is like a swiftly blooming rose Dispelling fragrance that sooths every woes True love is an unfathomable ocean of magnificent deeds Binding minds together like strings of exquisite beads True love is an amazing blissful gift Bestows on you wings of zeal for a gentle drift

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[0] Y2kSlamPoet 5-Jul-11/1:49 PM Reply

True love has nothing to do with tired and uninformed cliches. True love is like getting beat in the face and coming back for more. True love is beauty that compels one closer despite ones revulsion. True love is wiping your better half's ass without hesitation. True love is sacrificing your own happiness to ensure theirs-- and if they love you back they won't allow you to sacrifice your happiness: True love is sharing each others misery and being unhappy together. True love is to cherish the bits of him/her which others find to be disgusting. True love is making your lover suffer for their own good.

True love is a topic you are not equipped to discuss. Your "true love" has more to do with what makes you feel good. It encapsulates the essence of Hedonistic Selfishness.

[2] nypoet22 › Y2kSlamPoet 12-Aug-11/8:27 AM Reply

wow, don't hold back, tell us what you REALLY think! :)

i'd say true love is cherishing and accepting each other as we really are, which includes the lovemaking, the ass-wiping and everything in between. i got a kick out of your imagery though.