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Fly (Other) by etherealmaiden She awoke in the darkness
Her whole life in a box
No memoirs in her head
Everything lost
Struggling to reach
Striving to see
Through all of the shadows
Hoping to be free
No memory of the past
No memory of the power
Only knowing cruelty
Forcing her to cower
Knowing only that light shines
Outside of her box
Will she choose to fly
Or let all be lost?
Up the ladder:
Gravity
Down the ladder:
one true love (beta test)
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Posted: March 17, 2004 10:48 AM PST; Last modified: March 17, 2004 10:48 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.8013287 Overall Rank: 11148 Comments:
A big stinking pile of pump.
do i get a reason or are you just going to be rude?
You'll get mainly rudeness on poemeranker. Rudeness and shit poetry. Rudeness, shit poetry and clog-dancing dunces who waste their time writing sarcastic replies to other people's comments. -10-
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The other verses are too predictable however and the rhyme cower with power is absurdly forced.