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Fly (Other) by etherealmaiden

She awoke in the darkness Her whole life in a box No memoirs in her head Everything lost Struggling to reach Striving to see Through all of the shadows Hoping to be free No memory of the past No memory of the power Only knowing cruelty Forcing her to cower Knowing only that light shines Outside of her box Will she choose to fly Or let all be lost?

richa 17-Mar-04/11:14 AM
The rhythm of the the first verse I like.

The other verses are too predictable however and the rhyme cower with power is absurdly forced.




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