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Meters of my destiny (Free verse) by Bhuwan
Love, O my love,
my kisses
are not the repetitions.
They are,
the pristine brooks
of my soul.
With every kiss,
I go
beyond myself,
and endeavor
to proceed further
from where I was yesterday.
How vast has my boundaries become?
Though there are no boundaries
in this struggle to the death.
Love, O my love, listen to me.
What I am going to tell you
is unassailable.
There is nothing
for me
beyond your lips.
Your lips
are the meters
of my destiny.
Meters of my destiny.
Copyright 2005 Bhuwan Thapaliya.
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Posted: May 3, 2005 2:29 PM PDT; Last modified: May 15, 2005 8:13 AM PDT
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