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Meters of my destiny (Free verse) by Bhuwan
Love, O my love, my kisses are not the repetitions. They are, the pristine brooks of my soul. With every kiss, I go beyond myself, and endeavor to proceed further from where I was yesterday. How vast has my boundaries become? Though there are no boundaries in this struggle to the death. Love, O my love, listen to me. What I am going to tell you is unassailable. There is nothing for me beyond your lips. Your lips are the meters of my destiny. Meters of my destiny. Copyright 2005 Bhuwan Thapaliya.

Up the ladder: ishte ishta
Down the ladder: Wretch

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.3333333
Weighted score: 4.8013287
Overall Rank: 11177
Posted: May 3, 2005 2:29 PM PDT; Last modified: May 15, 2005 8:13 AM PDT
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[3] Dovina @ 69.175.32.185 | 16-May-05/1:10 PM | Reply
You're kidding?
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