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Think (Free verse) by necroscope7 I think therefore
Or not to be
My mind shall someday
Come to see
The error of
Games we play
Disappears from
Yesterday
Now my eyes
Do hear the sounds
Of children running
From the hounds
In their fright
They cannot know
It's all just hot dogs
On a TV show
So to be
Therefore I am
Not the door to leave
But a withholding dam
Up the ladder:
a feeling
Down the ladder:
MY BURNING RAGE
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Posted: June 6, 2002 7:45 AM PDT; Last modified: June 6, 2002 7:45 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.8 Overall Rank: 11185 Comments:
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-=SeTTle=- @ 63.214.96.187
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16-Jul-02/10:30 PM
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Why do you build me up, build me up, necroscope baby, just to let me down and mess me around with that piece of shit last line there (?)
Ha ha ha aha h ahja ah fuckin excellent!
Yep!
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