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You, the Line, and I (Free verse) by MacFrantic
Here I shall draw a line.
And it will run long-
Wrapping through the alleys.
It will run deep.
Bleed into the street-
Far down to the blackest soil.
And this line-
With no end in sight-
Sets us so many miles apart.
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Now you curse the barrier.
Though it is just-
And so admittedly fair.
Words caress the horizen.
Calls beckon the line to bend-
Calls in vain.
We arrive at swift glances.
Considering the circumstances-
No meaning comes of them.
But another line appears.
More defined than the first-
Which closes fast upon us.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5789
Posted: July 31, 2005 8:25 PM PDT; Last modified: July 31, 2005 8:25 PM PDT
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