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for one day only (Free verse) by pollywolly
the old man of the sea stares wistfully towards the shore, his grey eyes twinkling, matching the colour of the granite rock upon which he sits, wishing for one day only to be free of the storm-filled seas, and to walk proud like a man with the sand beneath his feet

Up the ladder: A Simple Band of Metal
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.905148
Overall Rank: 9772
Posted: January 11, 2006 9:21 AM PST; Last modified: January 11, 2006 9:21 AM PST
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[6] daggatolar @ 212.100.65.5 | 11-Jan-06/10:02 AM | Reply
those who hunger after the sea, can only dream of the land and sand... is this life?
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