| Poem: Submit | Random | Best | Worst | Recent | Comments |
|
for one day only (Free verse) by pollywolly the old man of the sea
stares wistfully
towards the shore,
his grey eyes
twinkling,
matching the colour
of the granite rock
upon which he sits,
wishing
for one day only
to be free
of the storm-filled seas,
and to walk proud
like a man
with the sand beneath his feet
Up the ladder:
A Simple Band of Metal
Down the ladder:
The Flawed Inventor
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Posted: January 11, 2006 9:21 AM PST; Last modified: January 11, 2006 9:21 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.905148 Overall Rank: 9742 Comments:
[6]
daggatolar @ 212.100.65.5
|
11-Jan-06/10:02 AM
|
Reply
those who hunger after the sea, can only dream of the land and sand... is this life?
158 view(s)
|
||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
