Re: La théologie pour les Politiciens by wilco	8-Apr-04/7:15 PM
I can't believe I've gotten no "guffs" and no irate rants from Zodiac....feeling left out....
Re: SEASON OF WINTER by galaxy4unknown	8-Apr-04/6:29 AM
Yes, you need to fix the spelling errors, and I would not use "thou" so much (if at all).
Re: a comment on Diary by wilco	7-Apr-04/8:03 PM
It was just the way I had it indented....In Word, every line was indented a tab space past the previous one in a sideways V pattern with the (Haiku?) thingie in the middle....but, alas, it was not meant to be so the hell with it.
Re: a comment on Alive within the sound of life by Prince of Void	6-Apr-04/7:09 PM
hmmm, yes I could see where it would be hard to incest your spell-checker....maybe just invest in one, instead.
Re: A Quick Lick Of Yellow by Jeremi B. Handrinos	6-Apr-04/1:34 PM
nice. You don't hear much about old Ra and Osiris these days...I wonder what they're up to?
Re: Over you by tre	6-Apr-04/1:24 PM
Been there.
Re: Diary by wilco	5-Apr-04/8:49 PM
This used to have a cool little off kilter structure but the poemranker submit box would'nt let me do it....stupid poemranker submit box.....
Re: Alive within the sound of life by Prince of Void	5-Apr-04/6:50 PM
Not a bad poem, but I think that you need to incest in Microsoft Word simply for the spell-checker. I've found that it helps!
Re: a comment on Daddy's Little Girl by daveslady	3-Apr-04/8:29 PM
well said.
Re: Wartner by unouluvme	2-Apr-04/7:55 PM
fashizzle my nizzle.
Re: It Won't Last Long by Spindle	2-Apr-04/7:50 PM
At first, I thought this was about joining the Army and going through boot camp....
Re: Price of an Affair by sonawrote	2-Apr-04/7:49 PM
-2 for self-loathing +8 for self-loathing
Re: a comment on Don't Cry, Sharon Tate by wilco	2-Apr-04/7:45 PM
lol
Re: Cargo pants by tre	2-Apr-04/12:42 PM
This is a cute little story..
Re: a comment on Don't Cry, Sharon Tate by wilco	2-Apr-04/11:55 AM
Check out the book "Helter, Skelter" by Vincent Bugliosi...or rent the movie if you're not into books. The movie is not great, though....
Re: A Special K by OfaRevolutionAJD	1-Apr-04/9:02 PM
You should send this to Creed...I bet they'd buy it.
Re: How does it feel? by OfaRevolutionAJD	1-Apr-04/8:59 PM
Sorry, but the way you have this structured makes it hard to read....
Re: a comment on Don't Cry, Sharon Tate by wilco	1-Apr-04/8:24 PM
The B movie actree murdered by Charles Manson's crew
Re: hands by New Life Drug	1-Apr-04/12:37 PM
I kind of dig this....
Re: a comment on The Hell With Growing Up by wilco	31-Mar-04/9:13 PM
Hey, you get it.