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How does it feel? (Pimple) by OfaRevolutionAJD
How does it feel to get stabbed n the back thinkin people are ur friends but ur really gettin jacked in the face with a fist of some sense but it aint goin through cuz ur head is all dense with these thoughts that u got in ur mother fuckin head when u think about this shit you wish u was dead but you keep on goin cuz u dont wanna fall but its kinda hard to do when there aint no one to call to talk about this shit that u got on ur mind so u keep lookin for the answer but its so hard to find so u sit the fuck back n take a look at ur life sometimes it gets so hard u wanna grab the knife and cut til u cant feel no more feelin there no need for life,breakin open the sore but u need to chill out and realize u need to stay ur life aint that bad we all got shitty days so fuck all them fakes there all fuckin corny your tryin to take ur life cuz u feel a little lonely? thats some of the stupidest shit i ever heard..u goto stop actin like this man ur being fucking obserd

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.8333333
Weighted score: 4.686235
Overall Rank: 12093
Posted: April 1, 2004 8:50 PM PST; Last modified: April 1, 2004 8:53 PM PST
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[5] wilco @ 24.176.102.131 | 1-Apr-04/8:59 PM | Reply
Sorry, but the way you have this structured makes it hard to read....
[7] Doc @ 207.5.245.246 | 2-Apr-04/4:10 AM | Reply
Reads fine.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159 | 2-Apr-04/8:43 AM | Reply
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