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Ash Wednesday (Free verse) by Dreamer No one will cry
No one will care
They'll see her fly
Screaming Life's not fair
Too many tests
Too many lies
They know best
Its easier to die
It wasn't far from the window to the concrete
It wasn't far from the ground to the door
They would mock such a feat
Ripping out her heart's core
Yet some people cried
Yet some people cared
Why she said bye
They just couldn't bear
For when she took her life
On that cold Wednesday, she lashed
She took more than one life
Their days are now nothing but ashes.
Up the ladder:
I Remember Thinking
Down the ladder:
Water Droplet
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Posted: March 6, 2003 2:47 PM PST; Last modified: March 6, 2003 2:47 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.682142 Overall Rank: 12098 Comments:
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Freethinker1602 @ 68.48.88.129
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17-Aug-03/1:57 PM
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has a sonorous ring to it...a bit familiar in some way. not to shabby, 7
Did she land fetus first? God, I hope so.
I think I'll go cry now.
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