Re: A Dangling Poo by zodiac	31-Mar-04/7:22 PM
dude......
Re: Watching The Rose Grow by Blindpoetry	31-Mar-04/6:37 PM
You did fore the rhyme, but still it flows well.
Re: a comment on The Hell With Growing Up by wilco	31-Mar-04/5:10 PM
You're pretty funny and make good sense when you're not being an ass.
Re: a comment on The Hell With Growing Up by wilco	31-Mar-04/4:55 PM
I understood what you were saying. My, you ARE in rare form tonight. By the way, can you (or anyone else reading this) explain to me where the satisfaction lies for these people that log in anonymously and give themselves 10s? Off the subject, I know, but I was wondering...
Re: a comment on The Hell With Growing Up by wilco	31-Mar-04/4:26 PM
That's funny. I was just about to reply with amazement that you gave a serious reccomendation, devoid of any (or, at least minimal)smart-assed comments. That struck me as unusual. Appreciated anyway.
Re: a comment on The Hell With Growing Up by wilco	31-Mar-04/4:03 PM
No, what?
Re: a comment on The Hell With Growing Up by wilco	31-Mar-04/3:57 PM
Ok..... 1) You don't believe what? That I've driven too fast? That I've used drugs? That I've had sex with strangers? Who didn't do these things when they were in high school and college? 2) I'm not saying that I've found Jesus and I'm not condemning these things. In fact, I'm saying that I wish that I could still do them.
Re: a comment on The Hell With Growing Up by wilco	31-Mar-04/3:10 PM
What does it matter?
Re: a comment on Another Fucking Slow, Sad Song by wilco	30-Mar-04/12:48 PM
Actually, it sounds pretty good with the music. Putting a capo on the 5th fret gives it a sad feel. The music makes it.
Re: a comment on Tennessee by wilco	25-Mar-04/9:00 PM
Good call. I've been drinking. But "Max" really sucked so I had to get rid of it. I'm not sure if this one's any good either, but in my mind, it's better than that one.
Re: a comment on where to go by AskittlesK	24-Mar-04/4:10 PM
Yes, my dear girl, Poetry.com is (essentially) a scam.
Re: a comment on New Years Eve, 1999 by wilco	24-Mar-04/1:41 PM
lol. No problem...you ARE somewhat right. ;)
Re: a comment on New Years Eve, 1999 by wilco	23-Mar-04/1:21 PM
I'm 25 now and it is hard to revise (at least for me) mainly because I have trouble going back to the place where I was when I wrote it and everything that I come up with to change it sounds too forced.
Re: Quiet Lakes by Fear of Garbage	23-Mar-04/1:16 PM
I like this one.
Re: a comment on A Permanent Fixture by wilco	23-Mar-04/1:14 PM
Yes, I wrote this one about 2 years ago during the summer. It's hard to touch up the older ones because I feel like I need to have the same feeling and be in the same place as when I wrote it. And, you're right, I do often tend to screw up the endings. ;)
Re: Untitled *involves taking pills and cutting with razors* by AskittlesK	21-Mar-04/4:36 PM
I sincerely hope that you're not really cutting yourself....but if you are then I would like to make the suggestion (perhaps unwanted) that you see your doctor about getting some antidepressants that ARE yours. I did like your poem though, by the way.
Re: a comment on New Years Eve, 1999 by wilco	18-Mar-04/8:46 PM
Do you mean shittier?
Re: a comment on New Years Eve, 1999 by wilco	18-Mar-04/3:03 PM
Hmmmmmm. You think it sounds like I gave up? Well, you may be right. It was supposed to be the realization that there is a new year ahead...full of possibility. Still, the word etched does kind of bring it down, as you mentioned. It WAS written when I was 20 years old. Perhaps it does need revision...I'll think on it...thanks.
Re: Hope, Approximately by wilco	10-Mar-04/7:43 PM
I am sick as I write this, so it might not make any sense. If not.....sorry.
Re: a comment on The Cessation of Fidelity by wilco	9-Mar-04/2:03 PM
Are they good? They look kind of like morticians...