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The Cessation of Fidelity (Free verse) by wilco
Shivering in the dark like the moss under a stone, I genuflect beneath the languid stars. From this ever expanding chasm, there appears no escape. But I've dug this hole myself and here I will lie eternally. I offer no apologies, for that would be in vain. I will face the jury, and welcome the waves with open arms. There is no remorse for my malefaction in my blackened, bitter heart. Only sorrow for what I've lost.

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.537883
Overall Rank: 2509
Posted: March 8, 2004 7:40 PM PST; Last modified: March 8, 2004 7:40 PM PST
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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 | 9-Mar-04/8:01 AM | Reply
guff
[9] BrandonW @ 172.201.249.41 | 9-Mar-04/11:30 AM | Reply
Oh, how we can all say the same thing in so many ways - been there - love it!
[10] fuzzylogicisatwat @ 195.92.198.75 | 9-Mar-04/12:42 PM | Reply
This poem, as a handbag half full of sick, should be politely discarded.
[n/a] wilco @ 24.176.102.131 > fuzzylogicisatwat | 9-Mar-04/12:50 PM | Reply
Then why did you give it a 10?
[n/a] Stephen Robins @ 213.146.148.199 > wilco | 2-Jun-04/7:34 AM | Reply
I splipped whilst wiping the spunk of my mouse.
[8] zodiac @ 152.31.228.13 | 9-Mar-04/1:47 PM | Reply
Do you think _Evanescence_ is the best band ever?
[n/a] wilco @ 24.176.102.131 > zodiac | 9-Mar-04/1:48 PM | Reply
Who?
[8] zodiac @ 152.31.228.13 > wilco | 9-Mar-04/1:55 PM | Reply
[n/a] wilco @ 24.176.102.131 > zodiac | 9-Mar-04/2:03 PM | Reply
Are they good? They look kind of like morticians...
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