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Another Fucking Slow, Sad Song (Lyric) by wilco
Go out at night I'll see you there Sitting alone But you don't care You feel the same You hide it well It's almost time for me to go And I'm just a fool, I know I've broken my own heart Just to give the pieces to you I made it home Turn on the lights Feed all your plants To make the night go by I'm going back six months or more To where we were Before the storm And I'm just a fool, I know I've taken my own life And placed it in a book for you Our future plans They're all aflame Don't take my word These pills are fine I'm broken down It's getting late Drinking again It's all have Well I'm just a fool, I know But I can't take a chance

Up the ladder: Horses

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 6.0
Overall Rank: 1286
Posted: March 12, 2004 10:25 PM PST; Last modified: March 29, 2004 8:42 PM PST
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Comments:
[7] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 29-Mar-04/11:30 PM | Reply
yep. sure is.
[7] deleted user @ 68.169.177.107 | 30-Mar-04/11:07 AM | Reply
"It's all I have"
This inconsistant meter would be hard to sing.
Such sadness.
[n/a] wilco @ 24.176.102.131 > deleted user | 30-Mar-04/12:48 PM | Reply
Actually, it sounds pretty good with the music. Putting a capo on the 5th fret gives it a sad feel. The music makes it.
[8] deleted user @ 68.237.206.160 > wilco | 30-Mar-04/3:49 PM | Reply
oh yea?

if you send me the chords/tabs or whatever you've got maybe i'll check it out...

jwknov29@hotmail.com

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