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A Special K (Lyric) by OfaRevolutionAJD
Wont you take, This star tonight Hold it close, Oh so tight.. Your hands are cold but you shine so bright.. And I never want to leave your sight Well its true...You put a spell on me too.. well its true...No matter what I do..... Well its true....I can never fall away from you... Well its true...I think that I need...you... Please take my hand, Ill hold you close... Well watch the world...Well watch it unfold... I see you cry...I wipe away your tears.. I never want to leave here... And when I look at your face... I cannot see to escape... Your eyes and how they trace your beauty.. And I dont know why i'm here.. Sitting down right next to you.. You are so beautiful.. Beyond what I've dreamed and we can just drift away and come back in a little while ... And we can just hide away for a little bit ... And we can do anything just keep dreaming a little bit longer ... Just a little longer now...

Up the ladder: Gifts of Friendship
Down the ladder: Table Toes

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.75
Weighted score: 4.8509965
Overall Rank: 10563
Posted: April 1, 2004 8:36 PM PST; Last modified: April 1, 2004 8:53 PM PST
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Comments:
[8] wilco @ 24.176.102.131 | 1-Apr-04/9:02 PM | Reply
You should send this to Creed...I bet they'd buy it.
[n/a] deleted user @ 68.237.204.115 | 2-Apr-04/2:25 PM | Reply
kick ass screen name. OAR rules.
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