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Sleep (Limerick) by hobojo Rolling between awake and asleep
I open an eye to take a peep
The alarm omits sound
But to the dream world I'm bound
My fingers graze snooze and I fall deep
9 mintes later it all starts again
All dreams faded, no moment of zen
My feet press to floor
Warmth and comfort no more
I can't beleive its past ten
Up the ladder:
How often?
Down the ladder:
A hangman's moaning
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Posted: July 29, 2004 12:24 PM PDT; Last modified: July 29, 2004 12:24 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.8509965 Overall Rank: 10570 Comments:
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Prince of Void @ 217.218.131.136
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29-Jul-04/12:28 PM
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That was good ..
I can't believe how bad your spelling is.
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