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Sleep (Limerick) by hobojo
Rolling between awake and asleep I open an eye to take a peep The alarm omits sound But to the dream world I'm bound My fingers graze snooze and I fall deep 9 mintes later it all starts again All dreams faded, no moment of zen My feet press to floor Warmth and comfort no more I can't beleive its past ten

Up the ladder: An Afternoon Walk
Down the ladder: Burnt

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.75
Weighted score: 4.8509965
Overall Rank: 10545
Posted: July 29, 2004 12:24 PM PDT; Last modified: July 29, 2004 12:24 PM PDT
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[7] Prince of Void @ 217.218.131.136 | 29-Jul-04/12:28 PM | Reply
That was good ..
[1] Edna Sweetlove @ 81.179.83.12 | 20-May-06/4:54 PM | Reply
I can't believe how bad your spelling is.
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