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A hangman's moaning

by Moauram

Member since 2012 · Posted 27 Jul 2012 · 6 comments

Is there anyone who sees my mind Alas doing for the sake of a bread; The justice perhaps may have a thousand reasons to make him stranglehold, surmounted my knot. That final stare varies, person to person Often making my mind so brittle; agonized faces many I have seen, But so penetrating is the beaming smile! Me the tool and he the sufferer, Is there anyone who sees my mind?

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[8] Dovina 27-Jul-12/9:17 PM Reply
I see your mind, his look at me when I fired him. Yes, it's not the same as your hanging him, but I see your mind. Good. Rest in peace.
[2] SupremeDreamer 27-Mar-13/8:25 PM Reply
It is the TOOL that suffers, fool. Not he who utilizes it. Ever seen the pen/pencil run out? Yeah, that's you.

And no, no one can see your mind except the asshole at the morgue. Till then "one must speak his/her mind."

You speak it like crap. The final stare of darkness would make a mind brittle... yet you're still alive.

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[2] SupremeDreamer 27-Mar-13/8:26 PM Reply
Oh, or the crazy mofo that kills you and opens your skull!
[8] Dovina › SupremeDreamer 30-Mar-13/2:58 PM Reply
shit comment!! why do you even come in off the street? no wonder this site has failed with idiots like you!
[2] SupremeDreamer › Dovina 4-Apr-13/4:07 PM Reply
OI! Looks like someone's a wee bit upset! :D

You should have been about here long enough to have gotten used to my crudeness. Dovi, baby, quit bitching and toughen up already!
[5] Stephen Robins 7-May-13/9:32 AM Reply
Yes you the tool.