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A hangman's moaning (Free verse) by Moauram Is there anyone who sees my mind
Alas doing for the sake of a bread;
The justice perhaps may have a thousand reasons
to make him stranglehold, surmounted my knot.
That final stare varies, person to person
Often making my mind so brittle;
agonized faces many I have seen,
But so penetrating is the beaming smile!
Me the tool and he the sufferer,
Is there anyone who sees my mind?
Up the ladder:
Sleep
Down the ladder:
Burnt
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Posted: July 27, 2012 8:21 PM PDT; Last modified: July 27, 2012 8:21 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.8509965 Overall Rank: 10571 Comments:
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Dovina @ 208.127.227.170
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27-Jul-12/9:17 PM
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I see your mind, his look at me when I fired him. Yes, it's not the same as your hanging him, but I see your mind. Good. Rest in peace.
It is the TOOL that suffers, fool. Not he who utilizes it. Ever seen the pen/pencil run out? Yeah, that's you.
And no, no one can see your mind except the asshole at the morgue. Till then "one must speak his/her mind." You speak it like crap. The final stare of darkness would make a mind brittle... yet you're still alive. ? 2.
Oh, or the crazy mofo that kills you and opens your skull!
shit comment!! why do you even come in off the street? no wonder this site has failed with idiots like you!
OI! Looks like someone's a wee bit upset! :D
You should have been about here long enough to have gotten used to my crudeness. Dovi, baby, quit bitching and toughen up already!
Yes you the tool.
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