poemranker ::Come Now by Joi

DetailsThe poem, its numbers, and the conversation.

Free verse № 153799

Come Now

Member since 2007 · Posted 4 Sep 2007 · 2 comments

Come now Go into the night Walking about Feeling the calm The stillness in the night Lets take a walk Feel the rain on your cheeks Smell the rain of the ground Hear all the voices That nature makes Voices of the night Sounds of the leaves Falling from the trees Joining the others Senses awakened Joy to be felt Peace of mind Numb to all Come now Lets walk along The sweet smell of wood The sent A night to remember.

Rate it

0 is the worst, 10 the best. Pick a number, add a comment if you like, then send it. Keys: 0–9 pick, Enter sends.

mean 3.75 weighted 4.85 rank 10569 views 253 View voting details →

4 votes so far. Yours would make 5.4 votes so far

2 comments

[7] richa 5-Sep-07/12:22 PM Reply
Better than your last. Still a lot of you repeating yourself to no particular effect. Also numb is a terrible word choice in a poem by a grownup.
[0] SupremeDreamer 10-Sep-07/2:29 PM Reply
Soon to be parodied. And trust me, it will be VULGAR and fantastically TASTELESS.