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Come Now (Free verse) by Joi
Come now
Go into the night
Walking about
Feeling the calm
The stillness in the night
Lets take a walk
Feel the rain on your cheeks
Smell the rain of the ground
Hear all the voices
That nature makes
Voices of the night
Sounds of the leaves
Falling from the trees
Joining the others
Senses awakened
Joy to be felt
Peace of mind
Numb to all
Come now
Lets walk along
The sweet smell of wood
The sent
A night to remember.
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.75
Weighted score: 4.8509965
Overall Rank: 10587
Posted: September 4, 2007 4:48 PM PDT; Last modified: September 4, 2007 4:48 PM PDT
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