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A hangman's moaning (Free verse) by Moauram

Is there anyone who sees my mind Alas doing for the sake of a bread; The justice perhaps may have a thousand reasons to make him stranglehold, surmounted my knot. That final stare varies, person to person Often making my mind so brittle; agonized faces many I have seen, But so penetrating is the beaming smile! Me the tool and he the sufferer, Is there anyone who sees my mind?

SupremeDreamer 27-Mar-13/8:25 PM
It is the TOOL that suffers, fool. Not he who utilizes it. Ever seen the pen/pencil run out? Yeah, that's you.

And no, no one can see your mind except the asshole at the morgue. Till then "one must speak his/her mind."

You speak it like crap. The final stare of darkness would make a mind brittle... yet you're still alive.

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