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Sleep (Limerick) by hobojo

Rolling between awake and asleep I open an eye to take a peep The alarm omits sound But to the dream world I'm bound My fingers graze snooze and I fall deep 9 mintes later it all starts again All dreams faded, no moment of zen My feet press to floor Warmth and comfort no more I can't beleive its past ten

Edna Sweetlove 20-May-06/4:54 PM
I can't believe how bad your spelling is.




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