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A Special K (Lyric) by OfaRevolutionAJD

Wont you take, This star tonight Hold it close, Oh so tight.. Your hands are cold but you shine so bright.. And I never want to leave your sight Well its true...You put a spell on me too.. well its true...No matter what I do..... Well its true....I can never fall away from you... Well its true...I think that I need...you... Please take my hand, Ill hold you close... Well watch the world...Well watch it unfold... I see you cry...I wipe away your tears.. I never want to leave here... And when I look at your face... I cannot see to escape... Your eyes and how they trace your beauty.. And I dont know why i'm here.. Sitting down right next to you.. You are so beautiful.. Beyond what I've dreamed and we can just drift away and come back in a little while ... And we can just hide away for a little bit ... And we can do anything just keep dreaming a little bit longer ... Just a little longer now...

wilco 1-Apr-04/9:02 PM
You should send this to Creed...I bet they'd buy it.




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