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Alive within the sound of life

Member since 2002 · Posted 5 Apr 2004 · 5 comments

Alive within arms of love Im Still alive within thousands one tears And memories within shadow Im Still in love within sarrow Im still alive within the Temptation of eternity oh I see all they had gone within despair After all what makes me alive within passion I know im alive within the secert It dawns within the beauty and the glory So happiness within peace Is the dream within me

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[n/a] Prince of Void 5-Apr-04/1:52 PM Reply

i love it

[5] deleted user 5-Apr-04/2:21 PM Reply

Should first line be "thousands of tears?"
Should second line omit the extra spaces?
Should third line be "sorrow?"
The list goes on!

[7] wilco 5-Apr-04/6:50 PM Reply

Not a bad poem, but I think that you need to incest in Microsoft Word simply for the spell-checker. I've found that it helps!

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › wilco 6-Apr-04/3:20 AM Reply

I once tried to 'incest' in Microsoft Word, but the fucking paperclip tipped off the feds before I had even achieved penetration.

[7] wilco › wilco 6-Apr-04/7:09 PM Reply

hmmm, yes I could see where it would be hard to incest your spell-checker....maybe just invest in one, instead.