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Alive within the sound of life (Free verse) by Prince of Void Alive within arms of love
Im Still alive within thousands one tears
And memories within shadow
Im Still in love within sarrow
Im still alive within the Temptation of eternity
oh I see all they had gone within despair
After all what makes me alive within passion
I know im alive within the secert
It dawns within the beauty and the glory
So happiness within peace
Is the dream within me
Up the ladder:
Mixed Posture
Down the ladder:
"Good Bye"
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Posted: April 5, 2004 1:49 PM PDT; Last modified: April 5, 2004 1:49 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.313765 Overall Rank: 3567 Comments:
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5-Apr-04/1:52 PM
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i love it
Should first line be "thousands of tears?"
Should second line omit the extra spaces? Should third line be "sorrow?" The list goes on!
Not a bad poem, but I think that you need to incest in Microsoft Word simply for the spell-checker. I've found that it helps!
I once tried to 'incest' in Microsoft Word, but the fucking paperclip tipped off the feds before I had even achieved penetration.
hmmm, yes I could see where it would be hard to incest your spell-checker....maybe just invest in one, instead.
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