Replying to a comment on:

Alive within the sound of life (Free verse) by Prince of Void

Alive within arms of love Im Still alive within thousands one tears And memories within shadow Im Still in love within sarrow Im still alive within the Temptation of eternity oh I see all they had gone within despair After all what makes me alive within passion I know im alive within the secert It dawns within the beauty and the glory So happiness within peace Is the dream within me

wilco 5-Apr-04/6:50 PM
Not a bad poem, but I think that you need to incest in Microsoft Word simply for the spell-checker. I've found that it helps!




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001