| Re: a comment on reflection by xunitedx |
20-Apr-04/4:20 PM |
When I filled the salt shaker with glue,
She beat me, beat me with her shoe.
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| Re: a comment on reflection by xunitedx |
20-Apr-04/1:35 PM |
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Balley's is also a Riverboat Gambling Hall in Tunica! (although it's with an e, but it sounds the same..)
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| Re: a comment on Moving Forward In Reverse (For Ann) by wilco |
19-Apr-04/1:38 PM |
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Actually, I have no music to go with this yet, and to be honest, I don't know that I'm going to write any. This might should have been called a free verse, but it kind of felt like a lyric....so here we are. If I do write any music for it, though, you'll be the first to know.
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| Re: a comment on Moving Forward In Reverse (For Ann) by wilco |
19-Apr-04/1:22 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Moving Forward In Reverse (For Ann) by wilco |
19-Apr-04/1:21 PM |
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Thanks for the feedback, H. I think, though, that to change these lines as you have suggested (and good suggestions they are) would change the meaning of said lines too much. And thanks for pointing out the punctuation error in the room line.
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| Re: a comment on Moving Forward In Reverse (For Ann) by wilco |
19-Apr-04/1:19 PM |
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I see the punctuation error in the room line but to change the other lines as you have suggested (while they are good ideas)would, in my eyes, change the meaning of the line. I do appreciate your input, though, H.
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| Re: a comment on Do You Like It by hotwire |
18-Apr-04/8:34 PM |
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hmmm....good enough I guess..but I'm going to have to change it to a 9 until I hear her sing it..
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| Re: a comment on Do You Like It by hotwire |
18-Apr-04/8:25 PM |
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That is....assuming that you're female. If not, I'll have to change it to a 0.
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| Re: nonsense by sarah |
18-Apr-04/8:05 PM |
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This is a good idea and a good poem. To be nitpicky, though, I think you mean Rorschach.
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| Re: Do You Like It by hotwire |
18-Apr-04/7:52 PM |
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As a man, I cannot help but give this a 10.
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| Re: a comment on La théologie pour les Politiciens by wilco |
18-Apr-04/6:09 PM |
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| Re: a comment on La théologie pour les Politiciens by wilco |
18-Apr-04/5:07 PM |
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I feel much better, thanks. But if it makes you feel any better...at least you are one of the few people who's irate rants make any sense....
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| Re: a comment on Suicide Girl by wilco |
18-Apr-04/7:46 AM |
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hmmm...let me ponder that for a while...
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| Re: a comment on Suicide Girl by wilco |
17-Apr-04/9:05 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Pretend by EvenPicturesFade |
17-Apr-04/8:38 PM |
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Being fake is one of the few things that we all have in common.
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| Re: Riding High On My Ignore List by horus8 |
15-Apr-04/3:41 PM |
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I don't really get a lot of it either, but it's funny as hell.
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| Re: a comment on Field Trip by wilco |
13-Apr-04/7:39 PM |
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Thanks. I don't think so either.
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| Re: On the Theme of Melted Pianos by embersandenvelopes |
9-Apr-04/10:10 PM |
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I kind of like this.....very....abstract?
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| Re: Three Bears by hotwire |
9-Apr-04/10:03 PM |
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YEs, it is different but the grammatical errors to make it a little hard to read in places.
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| Re: a comment on Jesus Rises from the Grove by wilco |
9-Apr-04/9:58 PM |
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It's being made into a feature film starring Antonio Banderas and George Lopez.
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