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nonsense (Free verse) by sarah
rorshack, rorshack comin' after me you de-scribe insanity dear mister doctor won't you say when my mind took off today? eye sees a pony eye sees a dog eye sees mommy through the fog dear mister desert de-sieved me you've got the know(ledge) of no sea what is the secret? whispering trees told my dad through squinted leaves i grew up then i fell down here we go again 'round and 'round

Up the ladder: No Single Tear
Down the ladder: Tall Windows

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.0397344
Overall Rank: 7068
Posted: April 18, 2004 6:47 PM PDT; Last modified: April 18, 2004 6:47 PM PDT
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[8] wilco @ 24.176.102.131 | 18-Apr-04/8:05 PM | Reply
This is a good idea and a good poem. To be nitpicky, though, I think you mean Rorschach.
[n/a] sarah @ 68.254.109.126 > wilco | 18-Apr-04/8:12 PM | Reply
omgoodness. you're right... i'm not always so careless. thank you for the comment. i guess i'll leave it the way it is here.

:) (blushing)... thanks
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