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A Fine Thread (Free verse) by Nepanthe
A single thread, for each of my friends.
Each a different strength, thickness and length.
I picture each differing in colour ,
a two-ply connection, winding onto a wooden spool.
I had noticed a warping, so I stopped tugging.
The winding together was slowing,
They were releasing too much yarn per spin of the wheel.
So I did as well to keep evenly matched, balance in all things.
Wound onto the spool,
I admired an artful co-operation,
a beauty of the past,
In completion.
There is nothing left to do but smile,
At the longing in my heart.
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Posted: June 12, 2007 5:23 PM PDT; Last modified: June 12, 2007 5:23 PM PDT
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