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Fisting and Wishing (Free verse) by John Rambo
Hello Is it me you're looking for? I know those are Lionel's lyrics... But I can't resist speaking them To you. You tempt me with your sweet words. You tempt me with your personality. You tempt me with your freshly shaven cunt. I'm living for giving the devil his due. Let's ball, bitch. Let's fucking ball.

Up the ladder: Fury
Down the ladder: A Soldier

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.0397344
Overall Rank: 7056
Posted: December 23, 2006 6:46 PM PST; Last modified: December 23, 2006 6:46 PM PST
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[6] Edna Sweetlove @ 85.210.229.135 | 13-Feb-07/12:02 PM | Reply
I liked the "freshly shaven" bit. It's things like that which separated the sheep from the, er, other sheep.
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