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nonsense (Free verse) by sarah

rorshack, rorshack comin' after me you de-scribe insanity dear mister doctor won't you say when my mind took off today? eye sees a pony eye sees a dog eye sees mommy through the fog dear mister desert de-sieved me you've got the know(ledge) of no sea what is the secret? whispering trees told my dad through squinted leaves i grew up then i fell down here we go again 'round and 'round

wilco 18-Apr-04/8:05 PM
This is a good idea and a good poem. To be nitpicky, though, I think you mean Rorschach.




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