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Pretend (Lyric) by EvenPicturesFade
Trying to hold back these tears Thinking things that I can't say I sit here alone to waste my life away I turn the volume up So I can't hear my thoughts So I don't have to think about Everything I've lost Pretend everything's okay Hoping my thoughts will go away Wanting to erase all of my mistakes Pretending that I'm not fake

Up the ladder: The Flower
Down the ladder: Tra-la-la

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.9403987
Overall Rank: 9067
Posted: April 17, 2004 7:10 PM PDT; Last modified: April 17, 2004 7:10 PM PDT
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[5] deleted user @ 68.66.196.168 | 17-Apr-04/7:14 PM | Reply
What's wrong with being fake? We are all fake. Just be a good fake, and you'll be ok.
[6] wilco @ 24.176.102.131 > deleted user | 17-Apr-04/8:38 PM | Reply
Being fake is one of the few things that we all have in common.
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