Field Trip

Member since 2004 · Posted 12 Apr 2004 · Edited 13 Apr 2004 · 2 comments

Wide, spacious hallway. Adequate lighting. White tile and red carpet Stretching forever. The bones of monsters Amongst columns of stars. Forged by the gods Taken by the heavens. Paintings staring back. Meticulously crafted. Agingâ¦ But never getting old.

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[9] deleted user 13-Apr-04/3:44 PM Reply

This poem is a little perplexing, but you're not a dunce, as some say, and your poemes are not bulging johnnies of lost hope. A field trip to the heavens!

[n/a] wilco › deleted user 13-Apr-04/7:39 PM Reply

Thanks. I don't think so either.