Comments bywilco, 661–680 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on Remembering Pretty Days by wilco 25 Apr 2004, 6:33 PM
The good teachers are hard to find.
replying on Remembering Pretty Days by wilco 25 Apr 2004, 6:33 PM
Yes, Spock would have said "Beam me up, bitch, for I have much nerve-pinching to do."
replying on evolution 9 by wilco 25 Apr 2004, 6:31 PM
This was a poem that I edited into another poem and there were acouple of comments that I did'nt feel had any value to the new poem and thus were deleted. :0)
As far as your other questions:
1) I don't think snakes came from mammals either but this is an allusion to the fact that we really don't know for sure (although its an obscure line I admit)
2) Yep, all the species that had the skills for survival did survive. This line refers to one that did not.
3) I wrote this after having a conversation with an extremely devout Christian woman who completely refused to acknowledge even the slightest possibility that evolution happened, despite the historical (read: fossil) evidence.
replying on Remembering Pretty Days by wilco 25 Apr 2004, 11:05 AM
yep. very poetic and stuff.
replying on evolution 9 by wilco 25 Apr 2004, 10:58 AM
No, I'm not Dave. I simply have a rabid fan base. It makes it hard sometimes...
replying on Remembering Pretty Days by wilco 25 Apr 2004, 10:57 AM
Apostrophes always mess me up...
i.e. - none the less - I was going for kind of a Bill Shatner kind of voice thing there....I don't know.....
replying on The How To on Haikus by <Wankster> 25 Apr 2004, 8:31 AM
It could depend on your geographic location. Someone in the deep south might pronounce it "pome" and therefore make it one syllable. Of course, this would still be wrong, but whatever.
replying on Writing the Books by validus_vox 25 Apr 2004, 8:16 AM
yep.
on Mental Escape by validus_vox 25 Apr 2004, 8:15 AM
Yes, some punctuation would definitely make this better.
on She Searches For Love by validus_vox 25 Apr 2004, 8:12 AM
I was going to give this a 7 until I read the comments and saw what it is about. For what it's worth, I think you should try the above suggestion and try rewriting it and trying to find the "right" words (I didn't get that it was a mentally ill girl until the comments). Still, it's not bad at all.
replying on Of Dreams and Obscurity by wilco 24 Apr 2004, 9:19 PM
By the way, I didn't mean for that to sound as smart-ass as it does. I really do like your poems.
on Exclamatory Abuse by Blindpoetry 24 Apr 2004, 7:26 PM
nice title. fitting.
replying on Of Dreams and Obscurity by wilco 23 Apr 2004, 9:53 PM
Of course. They are a constant source of inspiration to me. I must graciously extend my most humble apologies if I have offended you with my question. I suppose that I didn't understand that you were referring to yourself. :o)
replying on Of Dreams and Obscurity by wilco 23 Apr 2004, 9:50 PM
You see, there would be no limit to how tall you could be if all that you wanted to do was jump. To leap (a feat that I associate with small "low-to-the-ground" beings such as frogs, midgets, leprechauns, etc.) you would need to be, as mentioned, low to the ground. If you grew to extreme heights, I imagine that it would be impossible to leap....that you would simply jump.
replying on Of Dreams and Obscurity by wilco 23 Apr 2004, 12:46 PM
and do you think that the California despondent found any hope in the hills of Tennessee?
replying on Of Dreams and Obscurity by wilco 23 Apr 2004, 12:44 PM
A short story about a drunken leprechaun smoking a joint a Wrigley Field with Johnny Cash....it just might work.
replying on Summer Festival by wilco 22 Apr 2004, 1:04 PM
ooh....that was supposed to be "for the memory of all." Thanks
replying on Summer Festival by wilco 20 Apr 2004, 7:19 PM
H, I think you're reading too much into it now....lol...
1) If you're right in front of it in the front row, it seems that big.
2) True, but they ARE expensive.
replying on Summer Festival by wilco 20 Apr 2004, 6:56 PM
Well:
1) Rising high and filling the horizon - Those stages are huge.
2) a drink too costly... - Liquid goods (i.e. - water and beer) are very expensive at these large outdoor festivals.
3) flail and wail.....that is better...
on Loneliness by tuthaliash 20 Apr 2004, 5:20 PM
Yep...thats lonely...