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Mental Escape (Free verse) by validus_vox
In a conspicuous way, time begins to slow
Sounds slowing in beat and emphasizes words
Lights soften and air because fruitful
Sorrow and stress slip away into these times
Deep thoughts and sights invade the perception
Swirls and loops grasp the body
Legs and arms under and warm glow
Muscles breathe out with tension relief
Joy and happiness pull on the brain strings
Spitting out scenes of calmness and serenity
From these illusions come words of heart
Descriptive of mind state and environment
Entwining with surroundings to dance
Perfect choreography to please the eyes
A natural rhythm too complex to follow
Containing soft beats with rumbling bass
Hitting the treble so high it makes the eyes blink
Now is the time details can be sensed
Emphasis on pitches and tones of sound
Gleaming colors and shades of surroundings
Exhale
Up the head rises to the great blue sky
Heart thumping in the chest feeding the body
Muscles feel as if they peeled off the bone
Under the skin the highway of blood cells can be felt
Upward from the stomach comes a force upon the body
Lungs implode upon itself as air is jettisoned out
This is where I can think without fear
Worrying whether or not âtheyâ will like it
Iâm happy because I am free from it all
âTheyâ can not surpass what I have done for myself
So down I sift into myself with deep exploration
Conjuring up the past to truly assess myself
Slowly the mind reels to a slower pass
Sending all muscles in to complete relaxation
Bones seem to fill with lead as I lay down
Sinking into the springs the eyelids slither closed
Dancing images sooth the mind into nirvana
Away the mind drifts into a sea of dreams
Regenerating for the next day of life and journey
This is my escape from the structured world
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.8
Weighted score: 5.2145653
Overall Rank: 4403
Posted: April 24, 2004 12:20 PM PDT; Last modified: April 24, 2004 12:20 PM PDT
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Let the words do some of the work (give us both a break).
I'm afraid I must too sound harsh.
mike