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The Sky Is My Nation (Free verse) by fetisha
The sky is my nation
No war operations
Or dollar quotations
In the Country I live
Constellations of sisters
The clouds are my room
The planets my brothers
My mother the Moon
The heavenly lair
Of misteries afar
An ocean so fair
Suspended on stars
And there are no gates
To this infinite house
Patriotic I am
To a land with no laws
Come enter my homeland
Catch a comet, fly high
Free from earthly pain
May your nation be the Sky.
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Weighted score: 5.2145653
Overall Rank: 4380
Posted: February 27, 2005 12:12 PM PST; Last modified: February 27, 2005 12:12 PM PST
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Q2: What is involved in being patriotic to a nation with no laws? I wouldn't have thought it possible.